Short but to-the-point.
I like the concept, and I like the shortness factor a bit, but I have to say that the animation is terrible. You may as well just do a comic.
I respect your opinion
Lame, lazy attempt as a fight scene using sprites.
KanetheKnight makes a lot of good observations, but his rating is far too forgiving.
Choose music that fits the scene, and tone down the volume of it. I found it too loud. Also, the sound effects were far too annoying since the voices were just text boxes.
The textboxes were a pain to navigate, because the button to continue kept moving around. This made it hard to focus on the text I was reading.
The battles were animated fairly well... for a sprite animation, anyway. My only complaint about the fighting is that the characters were not using strategy of any kind. Also, Inu Yasha does not fit at all, and he was teleporting all over the place in the beginning yet could not do so during the battle.
It was pretty good. I like the moral of the story. The biggest problem with school is bullying, and the biggest problem with your animations is that they're too short to truly sit back and enjoy them.
It has potential, but it's currently simply too simple. You should also give credit to the musician. That music was used in so many Flash games that I think it's kind of boring. It's a bad loop, anyway. Too short.
You should try adding variations to the click challenges. A few ideas come to mind. You could make the button move. You could also add sound effects and have an invisible button hidden somewhere on the screen. You could say "Find the button and click it as many times as you can!"
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As I was doing my late night routine, I was thinking about adding other challenges and etc. I really like that you stated.
It's pure fun, and I like that I have to press space to begin. I don't see keyboard-controlled games often enough. Anyway, I don't like the art, as it's all black shadows on a white background. It's hard to see the bumps on the path, too, so I was surprised when I first noticed them slowing the runner down.
Lazy. Nothing of merit.
The art is terrible, and the interactivity comes down to dragging objects around. There's no depth control, and I can't get the accessories to look right on the pig. Also, why a pig?
Im not quite sure what "depth control" is, please tell via PM. And to awnser your question about the pig, I was looking around my room for an idea for a very simple flash that I could make/post withen a day, and I saw the piggy bank next to my laptop. So there xD As for the art, what dont you like about it? Please share. Thanks!
I do have one complaint: Why isn't it 20 minutes instead!
Fear not swell sandwich, it will likely be part of an album in the hour long realm.
As a previous review mentioned, I agree, you need to venture away from the original tune at least slightly to make it interesting. I played RS from 2002 (maybe 2001, can't remember) to 2008, and I have to say this song is very nostalgic to me. I actually like the RS songs, and I think this is a nice example of what RS has to offer.
Yeah... Not doing that. As I no longer play RuneScape, I have no interest in doing any more of its tunes, nostalgic though they be.
Thanks for your review.
$600 is good.
It's really a good song for what it's worth, just nothing great... like you said, mediocre. Anyway, I'm finding this song funny, and it was fun to listen to in the animation, just the animation wasn't really an animation, it was static images.
Enough about the animation. This song shows talent. I will look at your other work.
Pretty nice... so far.
It's unfinished! :(
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